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Avdo

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I need an honest opinion. If it sucks let me know. What u like. What u don't like. What would you change. I need to make it look as best as possible so any criticism is more then welcome. This is still work in progress. Nothing is final yet

http://cleanerdesigns.com/northstar/

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ciobanu_liviu

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This is how is showing on my phone. Maybe you can put 2 services on one lane and 2 on second. And you are going to get biger font under pictures. Is to small for me. Otherwise loking good and clean
 

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Omar

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Dont forget the phone number up top. Not visable untill you scroll to the bottom.
 
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Avdo

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This is how is showing on my phone. Maybe you can put 2 services on one lane and 2 on second. And you are going to get biger font under pictures. Is to small for me. Otherwise loking good and clean
Phone option is in the making as well.
 

Mike Krall

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Glad they are working on your janitorial before they do mine Avdo :)

I like the layout, clean and simple so far.
 

Avdo

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Glad they are working on your janitorial before they do mine Avdo :)

I like the layout, clean and simple so far.
Lol get in line brother heheh.
 

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Glad they are working on your janitorial before they do mine Avdo :)

I like the layout, clean and simple so far.
Who's designing yours Mike ?

Have to get mine redone this year, it's really dated
 

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That template is bad for ranking on google, almost no content on the home page.
 

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I need an honest opinion. If it sucks let me know. What u like. What u don't like. What would you change. I need to make it look as best as possible so any criticism is more then welcome. This is still work in progress. Nothing is final yet

http://cleanerdesigns.com/northstar/

Thank you
The bottom services listed cant be clicked but the highlight as you scroll over them. I clicked on any of the top services and get an error. Error listed below.




WHOOPS!404

It looks like you are lost! Try searching here
 

Avdo

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The bottom services listed cant be clicked but the highlight as you scroll over them. I clicked on any of the top services and get an error. Error listed below.




WHOOPS!404

It looks like you are lost! Try searching here
Still in the making. Beginning stage tho that's why there is an 404 error
 

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Load time was horrible on my phone...make sure u have a fast loading layout for mobile with the phone number where they can just click on it and the dialer opens....you ahoukd unpublish your site while your working on it...search engines still crawl the site and see it with all those dead links etc...get it closer to finished then ask for critique when the content is there

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The 4 service descriptions with the big image as background should not just shrink but change in numbers and rows if you use smaller screen size: 2x2 for tablets and 1 column and 4 rows for phones.

The service descriptions on the bottom of each service page should be centered when looking at them on a smart phone.
 

BritFromMontgomery

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Aesthetic-wise, it looks great. I agree with some of the others: a clickable phone number right at the top would really help conversions. And, content-wise, you'll be facing a major uphill battle... in terms of ranking in Google for carpet cleaning terms... if you don't add more content. Not saying it's not doable - it is - but it's so much harder.

I just made a carpet cleaning website for a friend of mine in Montgomery, AL, and made the home page quite long. (If you struggling to come up with content, feel free to "swipe/reword" some of what I wrote: http://www.carpetcleaningmontgomery.com/)... But it's already getting a decent amount of phone calls by showing up on page 1 of Google for some of the phrases prospects are searching for that I've sprinkled throughout.

Anyways, off to a great start. Good luck.

Hey everyone, I'm the new girl. Look forward to learning from you all.
 
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rccva

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Aesthetic-wise, it looks great. I agree with some of the others: a clickable phone number right at the top would really help conversions. And, content-wise, you'll be facing a major uphill battle... in terms of ranking in Google for carpet cleaning terms... if you don't add more content. Not saying it's not doable - it is - but it's so much harder.

I just made a carpet cleaning website for a friend of mine in Montgomery, AL, and made the home page quite long. (If you struggling to come up with content, feel free to "swipe/reword" some of what I wrote: http://www.carpetcleaningmontgomery.com/)... But it's already getting a decent amount of phone calls by showing up on page 1 of Google for some of the phrases prospects are searching for that I've sprinkled throughout.

Anyways, off to a great start. Good luck.

Hey everyone, I'm the new girl. Look forward to learning from you all.
Hi Brit, nice site, looks similar to mine.
http://Rccva.com



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the rugman

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Aesthetic-wise, it looks great. I agree with some of the others: a clickable phone number right at the top would really help conversions. And, content-wise, you'll be facing a major uphill battle... in terms of ranking in Google for carpet cleaning terms... if you don't add more content. Not saying it's not doable - it is - but it's so much harder.

I just made a carpet cleaning website for a friend of mine in Montgomery, AL, and made the home page quite long. (If you struggling to come up with content, feel free to "swipe/reword" some of what I wrote: http://www.carpetcleaningmontgomery.com/)... But it's already getting a decent amount of phone calls by showing up on page 1 of Google for some of the phrases prospects are searching for that I've sprinkled throughout.

Anyways, off to a great start. Good luck.

Hey everyone, I'm the new girl. Look forward to learning from you all.
Looks nice - why does everybody use that dumb ass image of the vacuum cleaning carpet? I see it everywhere and it insults the hell outa me! Nothing against you (although you are about to get lambasted because this was your first post - sorry) - I just hate those crappy stock images that I see on lead gen sites all over is all.