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rob allen

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We perfected a solvent sealer and now just finalizing a label. What do you think of this?
(PS:The super hero look is my sons doing not mine. Guess he thinks his dad is an ok guy.)

 

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Looks better than the other version. Still missing that special something though.
 

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It needs on the label it's best selling feature. What sets it apart from all others. Sealer I associate with hard surfaces but I am not a carpet cleaner and know absolutely nothing about carpet cleaning.
 
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Personally I think you should make a holographic foil label that shows a very dirty stained area and then morphs into the super hero pose protecting and restoring it.
 

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First question who is the customer you are trying to attract?.Is it the home owners, professional service providers?. Home owners may like a multi purpose product. Some one like myself who specializes in hard floor care is looking for a product that is out standing in that field. If you are trying to attract both carpet and hard floor care I would have 2 labels 1 for each. Something that is used for carpet would be a turn off for my profession.
 
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Is there going to be a noticeable difference between Yours, Cobbs, Saiger, and Soap Daddy's sealer?
 

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I agree with the above the label still needs something to make it pop but I don't really have any suggestions yet but I'll think on it and hopefully have some helpful consumer input.
 
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I can see the couch. I'm assuming the couch is on the carpet but the carpet looks like it could be a hard surface. Your character looks like he's standing on some blinds and I think i see some satillo tile at the very end.
 
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We perfected a solvent sealer and now just finalizing a label. What do you think of this?
(PS:The super hero look is my sons doing not mine. Guess he thinks his dad is an ok guy.)

You might, or maybe add a shield or some sort of knight armor or something like that. Give it a metallic with rivets look...
 

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is a sealer for the hard surface or a protector for the carpet and upholstery? Lets not forget area rugs too!

Will this formula be solvent or water based? Id love to see vids on demo and training (application)
 

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Duh... I would rather critique the product than the label
It will be out in approximately 2 weeks. When we formulated it we did side by side tests with leading brands for longevity and UV exposure. This is why we took so long to come out with one. I would not release it till it completely outdistanced them all.
 
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Super sealer
With an SS on your chest
With a small bold Solvent badge in a green colour
So if you do a water based “super sealer” have a blue water badge
 
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It will be out in approximately 2 weeks. When we formulated it we did side by side tests with leading brands for longevity and UV exposure. This is why we took so long to come out with one. I would not release it till it completely outdistanced them all.

Cant wait to try some
 
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