Brand New Website, Please Critique!

Get rid of the rotovac video, women do not care about our equipment/chemicals/ heat. Only carpet cleaning "guys" care about that stuff.

Be original and show a video of happy customers or talking about service

Everybody should get rid of those carpet cleaning videos, there terrible

I think it looks good. But I think the font in the description paragraph could be larger. And the pictures that you click on at the bottom take you away from the site. Perhaps, make those pictures at the bottom open in a new pop-up window.

I think if you were to keep the rotovac video you need to change the music. No offense but Its a little annoying.
Also agree with the other guy in that your font size might be on the small size. I do alot of work for the elderly and they might have trouble reading that.
Also you have the rotovac 360 for the featured video but then when you click on the carpet cleaning section there is a picture of a guy with a wand. This might confuse some people as to your preferred method for cleaning.
I REALLY like your symbol and all the palm trees. I wish PA was more like that.
Other that that I think so far its nice.

I feel that the video just needs a little tweaking. My first thought was that the music wasn't very lady like, the other thought was instead of doing the video himself, he should have someone filming him in his nicest uniform (kind of like the one Larpy did). I think that there are a lot of women out there that really enjoy seeing a well dressed man taking care of her home and cleaning needs. If you don't think its true, jump up after dinner some night and do the dishes for the wife, she will show you love like you were 20 again.
PS: I'm going upstairs to do some dishes!

thanks guys ill talk wit tre

thats weird, i think i commented on this yesterday but my comment must have been erased or something?

I think leave the vid in there.
It is always surprising to me how many customers remark when i use the 175 or if i use the RX20.
They say things like the OTHER cleaners i have used never ever did this of that or used equipment like that.
If you've got it flaunt it.
I think its a great looking site and i am certain it will pull lots of dollars in for you.

Mick

Look at drynclean site, thats the standard. customer testimonial, pictures of homes. etc

No pictures of wand guys or videos of guys cleaning carpet. End result

Do You want to know how hot dogs are made?
No, we want to know how good they are in the backyard on the grill with our family hanging out

You make a good ponit
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Thats funny!!!!!!

I like the site, think it looks cool....The video is another issue, the site looks very professional but the video seems very amateurish and really doesn't fit, maybe just my computer, but the audio is terrible..

Just my 2 cents.

Maybe tre can bring his audio experience and create a cool jingle?

Then tie it to the voicemail and on hold music. One consistent theme, that would be cool.

when reading there service list in the middle of the page you get lost we clean a b c d e f g h 123456789 .. To me its to busy I like simple and easy read stuff .. maybe a simple list top to bottom ?

I give it a 5.5 out of 10. It is very blocked and doesnt flow. Its very crowded. There are some good pictures and some of the text is good.

I think the website has a generic look. No wow factor, nothing that is going to make me remember it. With a generic website, it labels the company as generic, nothing special about them.

With all the competition out there you have to stand alone, have your image be unique.

Tre have you thought of using another website builder? One that gives you more options and "toys" to play with. Do you have a link to other websites you have done?

Brent
I find some of your comments kinda odd.
Most ppl are looking for some good pics and some good text.
Most potential customers would have found this web site either through google (which Tre works very hard to have good positioning) or in a lot of cases seeing the vehicle around town.
If it was the later case most would feel at home and at ease knowing they have some kind of connection to the site through repeat sightings of the van around town.
You may miss the so called WOW factor because your in the buiness and as such you are more likely to miss the attractive parts of the site because your most likely more interested in standing one site againt others you may have seen.
The one thing i would change though would be to have the van come up first on the rotating pics so local people can relate immediately with the site.
The best most expensive site ever created in the world with all the toys and gimmicks is of no value if it can't be found.
I love being able to go into my site and change things at any time i like.

Mick

I dont like it. I dont see anything different, new or unique but I'm not the target so who cares? LOL.

who ever owns it can come back here in 3 months and tell us if it worked for him or not.